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Bokuto Kotarou ([personal profile] nyctea) wrote2020-03-24 03:01 pm

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[personal profile] setuponastar 2020-06-05 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
Oh...

[The 'yet' is almost worrying. Almost. Whether a serious consideration or not, it might be preferable to the current situation, with Bokuto refusing to lift himself back up.

Sitting together is going to be troublesome.

Not wanting to push the accusation any further and risk causing a scene, Akaashi uses that moment of not being watched to turn his attention to a textbook he's opened up, and begin looking over one of the final chapters. Or rather, to appear to, at least, as he's soon aware that he won't be able to focus while they're together. What limited time they have left is too valuable.

Except--
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Ah, we shouldn't have those here...

['We.' Because while blaming his friend entirely for having brought food into such a place might be correct, it doesn't feel right. Chances are more than enough mistakes are already weighing the older boy down.

Akaashi does move to hold out a hand for the candy despite his supposed disapproval. A show of sorts, that if something goes wrong here he'll take the blame too. ... Although, he has to wonder if the meaning will even get across.

Whether it does or not, maybe providing a further distraction could be of some use. He pushes his book away slightly.
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Reviewing this one again may be excessive. Have you brought any of your own assignments? I wouldn't mind trying to help, this time.

[What was already spoken quietly is suddenly more so. It's the last thing he'd like to offer under normal circumstances. But those are over, aren't they?]
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[personal profile] setuponastar 2020-06-09 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
[Proofreading, then? His interest seems to pick up, at that. It's really the best option, with no risk of having to do all the work himself. So accepting the notebook and absently having a few of the candies, he starts reading the essay over. The lettering's messy, sure, but he's used to it by now. It's just childish in a rather endearing way, give or take a few spelling errors. ... Hm.

Finishing the snack off to free his hand, Akaashi reaches for a pencil and highlighter. Maybe it's rather early to do so if he wants Bokuto to cheer up. There isn't really a more tactful way to go about it, though.

He pauses to look to the other for a moment, a bit happier, himself, to see that he's no longer so listless.
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Your ideas look right, so far.

[Akaashi's confident in that much, despite the subject not being one he's covered yet. It's.. more he can tell when Bokuto's repeating what he's learnt or making things up as he goes. So the more pressing issue:]

Do you want the corrections in your notebook, or on a new sheet?

[It'll have to be rewritten either way. Better not to lead with that.]
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sorry for the wait!

[personal profile] setuponastar 2020-06-15 08:49 pm (UTC)(link)
[With that permission, he'll get started, then-- highlighting instances where the wrong lettering's changed a word's meaning, placing brackets and arrows to arrange thoughts more fluidly, and of course leaving short, tidy notes of his own to explain, where there's space.

It's almost a relaxing task, despite being 'work'. A rewarding one, as well, when he hears Bokuto offer that praise. Although rather common from him, it's always so nice to receive. So to think that this could possibly be the last time...
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Am I? I thought I'd been distracted lately...

[His claim's not untrue, despite his focus right now. Akaashi's thoughts have been elsewhere, only thankfully leading to mistakes more redundant than harmful, and in turn far less obvious. Having come here, for example, intent on reading through textbooks he'd already finished as though their contents could have possibly changed.

But honesty's not his reason for saying as much. Rather, it may be selfishness instead. As illogical a thought as it is, perhaps rejecting such praise means that this can't be the last instance of it. That it doesn't have to feel like such a finite thing.

...

Once mostly satisfied with his changes to Bokuto's paper, Akaashi moves the notebook slightly to share what he's done.
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This isn't wrong, but please try to avoid jumping between topics so quickly.

[He points out a few of the lines that should be rearranged.]

It makes more sense if it's written in order.